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Saturday, June 14, 2008

Finally...

after a month of idleness, naicpan q rin sa wakas na magpost d2 s blog ko. and dhil bagong school year n, bagong buhay na. ngayon, tula(?) nmn ang ipopost ko.

brief history of the poem(?) i'm gonna present. naisulat ko i2 sa sinehan habang umiinom ng iced tea kuno pero lasang tubig lang na may asukal. cguro malungkot lang ako nung araw na iyon kaya ganito ang naisulat ko. without further ado, e2 na.

"Bottomless" by T.G. Pontakun

I'm sitting here alone, in a table for two,
A glass of iced tea sat in front of me to quench my thirst,
Time passed quickly,
And the beverage was down to its last drop,

Unlike any other drop, this was pretty peculiar,
This drop was as liquid as any other, as cold as any other,
But it had a biter, salty, sour, taste, I could not deduce it,
It felt like it was not iced tea anymore,

I looked at my glass and was taken aback,
The glass was filled, but i doubt that it's tea,
It had the same feel, it had the same taste,
It felt like "the last drop" hat went through my throat

Alas, i came to my senses,
My moist cheeks gave it away,
It seems that my thirst was never quenched,
So my glass remained full.

alam ko, magulo siya. pero iyan n talaga ung gustong isulat ng kamay ko e. anyway, please feel free to give suggestions("cedric, ayusin mo nmn ung punctuation marks mo"), opinions ("cedric, mejo pwede na), or violent reaction ("*insert mura here* cedric, ang panget ng gawa mo. umayos k nmn sa buhay mo").

oras na pla noh?, apat p homework at wala p kong nagagawa . hanggang sa muli.....